Rhetorical Essay

This is a Rhetorical Analysis Essay on the Article “From Wasteland to Wonderland: TVs Altered Landscape, by Jeff Greenfield. Please read the attached article and the draft of the Essay.
-The Essay must be between 1,000-1,500 words. So far I have 714.
-Please take a look at the highlighted sentence in the Introduction for re-wording.
-The three body paragraphs have been started but each paragraph needs 2-3 direct quotes from the article. Basically, they need a little more meat.
-The paper also needs to include 10 templates from the They Say/I Say book by Gerald Graff, Cathy Birkenstein. The templates used need to be underlined.
-A strong conclusion needs to be constructed as well.